Friday, 8 June 2018

Creative writing.

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given this week the words were: pink, huge, bridge, sprinkled and daffodil.




               the big cupcake.

   One day in a world there was a day called flower day. Now on this day there
   Was a event called the flower day. It is a day were the first person to grow
   The most best flower in the hall world. It is over a big bridge down a steep
   hill is where you will find your destination. One day there was a
 Flower never planted before. It was a daffodil the most best flower
In the hall world. But on that day something went wrong? There was
 a huge pink cupcake. It had sprinkled sprinkles everywhere it was a
Disaster. It came from the big bakery shop. One of the people at the flower
event said “oh no the bakery  most of put exploding chocolate in it” another
Person said” ha ha I don't think so  ha ha” ha ha the person that said the exploding
Chocolate was right. One person was eating the cupcake he said “oh that  really good no no really really good” everybody was so shocked? One “ no no you can explode oh no don't do it again”.but He eat it again. “No”. She screamed. She was devastated. She was so angry She can scream. So she did She screamed. After  the man went to the Hospital and the mess was cleaned up they all went     
 Home.
              

No comments:

Post a Comment

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.

Market day.

 Kia ora! Welcome back to my blog. Yesterday on Wednesday we had somthing called market day. All of the school was split up into their own t...