Friday, 14 February 2020

Just a dream







              Just a dream
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Once upon a time in 1853 there was a girl named Alice Who lived with her mum and her sister Dalis. Her dad worked at a newspaper place and took people on trains to other places. It was a night like no other, their mum was scared and screaming as she looked out the window to see a scary looking ship. She rushed to the sisters' rooms and she woke the two sisters up in a rush. She told the kids to pack as much as they could into their broken bags. As they ran out the door in shock they saw their mum from a far away distance still inside the house. As it flew towards the kids they couldn't tell what it was. It took a turn and landed by their house. Their mum was on her knees crying with her hands in the air. Alice and her sister ran to the newspaper place and their dad was there waiting to refill the newspaper on the train. They told their dad what happened but he didn't believe them. He told the kids that everything was going to be ok and gave the kids a big hug and went off. They slept outside the newspaper place and it was raining a lot. The next day the sun came out. The sisters ran home to see what happened their mum was devastated. She had woken up after the ship came. The kids ran to mum and gave her a big hug. Mum was so happy to see her kids but still sad to see that the house and their belongings were all taken by the ship. Dad came back from the train and didn't know where the house was as he couldn't see it. He ran to where he thought the house should be and saw the kids on the floor. He finally believed what had happened. Alice ran to dad and asked if he could help mum up. Her mum was on the floor and she couldn't get up. Her back was so sore that the kids had to give her a hug while she was lying on the floor. Dad went over to mum and got her up. She was holding her back as she stood up. Dad asked what happened and mum said that she couldn't remember what happened. Dad was going to buy their mum a…RING RING RING RING what’s that noise? Suddenly a girl woke up and her name was Mikaylah. As she woke up she said “lucky it was just a dream”. She got out of bed and got ready for school and who knew that she went to the best school Hornby Primary School Te Mahura Manuka. She went to her class and saw her beautiful teacher and friends and started to do some learning in her cool class with all her friends.

3 comments:

  1. Great story i hope you are enjoing hps as much as I did
    Well done on being a truster treaker.BYE(:

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  2. I like your Tuhituhi Mikaylah.

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  3. Hello Mikaylah.
    I'm glad this was just a dream although I think I would call it a nightmare.
    Was this work part of free writing in class or did the teacher give you something to write about?.
    Because the sun is out I am going to go roller blading in Waterloo Park with Salt in his pram.
    What are you doing to have fun during these holidays?.

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